Friday, October 12, 2007
Fan-Fiction (Heroes season 2-Peter)
Heroes Season 2 chapter one “Four Months Later”
Original Air Date: 24 September 2007; I saw it on 8 October 2007.
The evolved humans who once banded together to save the world from Sylar are adapting to their new lives. In feudal Japan, Hiro meets Takezo Kensei. Matt takes his detective exam, and, along with Mohinder, has taken Molly into his care. Kaito Nakamura and Angela Petrelli learn of a threat upon their lives, while Angela's son Nathan is taking Peter's death badly. While Maya and Alejandro are on the run, Peter wakes up in a suprising location. Claire tries not to be noticed in California, while Noah Bennet and Mohinder plan to finally take down The Company.
Season 2 chapter one “Four Months Later”: At a shipyard in Cork, Ireland, three thugs—Ricky, Tuko, and Will—search for a shipping container which they believe to contain iPods. Instead, they find a half-naked Peter handcuffed inside the empty container. They ask him where the merchandise is, to which he replies that he doesn't know. Tuko tries to strike him, but Peter defends himself by shooting an electrical bolt from his free hand, hurling his attacker to the ground. The other thugs draw their guns on him and ask him who he is, but Peter doesn't know.
Action for Peter:
Peter Petrelli was found and his right hand was locked up in a large container by a group of ipod robbers in Cork, Ireland. These robbers were surprised to see only Peter Petrelli inside but not the ipods when they opened the container. So the boss of those robbers asked Peter Petrelli:”What the hell are you doing here? Where are the ipods?” At that time, Peter Petrelli is very scared, he didn’t say anything. Meanwhile, one of the robbers was going to use some violence to jog his memory, suddenly, Peter Petrelli raised his left hand, a spark came out from his left hand and hit the man down. Then, the boss used his gun pointing at Peter Petrelli and said: ”Who are you? What’s your name?” Then, Peter Petrelli said: ”I don’t know.” Finally, these robbers took him into dark room and tied him up on a chair, one black man poured a bucket of water onto Peter Petrelli’s face, and Peter Petrelli was awake, he asked:”Where am I?” The black man punch on his face and then said: Home.” Then, the other white man said to him: ”You took something that’s ours, boy-o.” Then, the boss said: “Just tell us where you sthed the ipods. We’ll cut your binds. You’ll bon your way. As square a deal as you’re likely to find.” Then Peter Petrelli answered: “I didn’t take anything.” Boss said: ”Right, with the thousands of shipping containers coming through cork harbor every day, you just happen to be having tea in the one we were sent to rob.” Peter Petrelli said:”I don’t know how I got in there.”
The boss said:”You might wanna consider remembering, boyle. You’re in a bad spot.”
One day after, the boss’s sister came into the dark room and said to Peter Petrelli:”Bet you were prettier yesterday.I like your necklace. What does it mean?”
Peter Petrelli answered:”I wish I knew.”
The girl said:”Let’s try an easier one. What’s your name?”
Peter Petrelli said:”I don’t know.”
Girl Said:”It’s not your day, is it? I’m Caitlin. Your know that much now.”
Peter said:”Caitlin.”
Girl said:”mm-hmm?”
Peter said:”What are they gonna do to me?”
Girl said:”I don’t know. Whatever my brother thinks is best.”
Peter said:”Your brother? Did he send you in here?”
Girl said:”He’d pitch an epic fit. Thought I’d try a kinder tack. Thing is, this job, it’s bigger than
you and a couple of quid. They pulled it for this man named mcsorely. Promised
delivery today.”
Peter said:”So what happens if the guy doesn’t get what he wants?”
Girl said:”You have to remember something. Anything—a name, a face.”
Peter said:”First thing I remember is your brother and his crew finding me. Then the big guy
came at me and.”
Girl said:”And an electrical short blew tuko on his arse. I heard the story.”
Peter said:”The spark. I think it came from me. My hand. I, I know that it seems.”
Girl said:”Is it possible? I’ve just rung out a lot of your blood. You don’t have a mark on you.”
Then, they both looked at the mirror. The girl went out the room. His brother told her:”Keep an eye on him, if he so much as lays an inconsiderate fart, you grab the gun.”
Sister said:”What I am, 12?”
Brother said:”Always.” Meantime, Peter was trying hard to loose himself, he used his power to let the rope loose itself, then he wanted to escape from the window. At the same time, there are two men came into the house, the girl said to them:”Sorry, fellas. Ricky and the boys just left.”
A man said:”Aye, I saw. We’re not here for ricky.”
Girl said:”Lucky then. I’ve just tapped a barrel. Two points?” The girl took a gun out.
The man grab her gun and said:”No, thanks, love. We came for you.”
The girl kicked the man, the man push her on the table, at this time, Peter came out from the room and use his power again, the spark came out from his left hand and hit the man down. the other man used a short gun pointing at him, then, Peter raised his left hand and use his power again, but this time, he used the mind-control power to remove the short gun from the man’s hands. Then they start fighting with hands, within a few seconds, Peter used his power to put the man through a wall. After a while, the girl’s brother came back, he said to Peter:”You turned a fixable monetary problem into a blood feud. You’re gonna make this right. We’ll do another job.” They were going to rob again, Peter has the mind-reading power, so he could hear someone’s thoughts. He heard that one of the robbers was going to kill the others and took all the money away when they were discussing the robbery plan. So he told the boss, however, the boss trusted his own men rather than him. At that night, they went to rob the money, at the end, Peter used his mind-control power to move a truck to stop the security guards, so they could run away. After they got home, finally, the betrayer show up, he shot twice at Peter’s chest, and Peter did not die, he stood up and used his power to put the betrayer on the wall and the bullets were pulled out from his chest automatically, and he had the power of recovery, so the wound can be self-recovered. Finally, he did not kill the betrayer, he just let him go, because he has a good soul.
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5 comments:
Hi, Shelly.
As far as I know, (I asked to my son) Heroes is an America SF drama, TV series which is based on your fan fiction.
Unfortunately, I haven’t seen these episodes, as a result, although I’ve read your fan fiction several times, it’s too complicate to understand. Furthermore, the style of writing the dialogues such as Girl said: Peter said: were rather deterring to read or were unfamiliar to me. It may be because of my lack of understanding ability.
However, I found that your story deals with Heroes who have special abilities should protect people from dangerous disasters or situations.
Am I right?
Grace,
I find it rather confusing to read as well. Also, Shelley, you'd posted so many entries. Are they all suppose to be a part of the fanfiction assessment?
Are they different fanfics dedicated to each different episodes?
hi Grace,
Thank you for your comments. I agree with you, without watching the series, it's difficult to understand. I am sorry about so many dialogues cause you confusion.
For your question, yes you are right. The drama is mainly about a group of people who have special abilities try to save the world.
And my story is about two special heroes, one is good, another is bad. Very old style.
hi Pear,
Because the drama is a series. so i try to make my fanfiction like a series. But it doesn't work.
you guys' valuable comments are really helpful for me. I re-writed the War between Peter and Sylar, and posted.
please have a look, and feel free to ask question or give me some suggestions :)
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