In this assignment, I am going to act myself as Optimus Prime. It means that I would like to retell this story in Optimus Prime's viewpoint. In fact, when people think of a hero they look for certain qualities, for example, bravery, strength,wisdom, compassion, determination and many other things. I think that optimus prime have these excellent characterisitics. And he is a idea leader. All who look at optimus prime look at him with the greatest respect. Even his greatest enemy. Espeically, his greatest enemy, Megatron, would admit that prime is greatest leader and fighter. Of all characters in the transformer, prime is the most loved and most popular. Also, he is the most recognized transformer in the world. Furthermore, he knows nof fear and would die for his beliefs in peace and freedom. Therefore, he is absolute a hero. That is only reason why I choose the optimus prime for the hero in the fanficition.
Autobots were the descendants of a line of robots that created by the Quintessons on the planet Cyberton. Their bodies were forged by the Plasma energy chamber. Because they want to against their creators. So that optimus and his colleagues , including bumb lebee, ironhide,jazz and rachet. They decide to go to find the new cube in the earth. However, they meet their enemy who are Megatron and his colleagues who includes Starscream, Barricade, Frenzy, Bonecrasher and Scorponok. And then they start a war to contest the new cubes in the earth.
For this week, I just write some ideas or thoughts which I am going to write in this assignment. But I haven't finish yet. I am going to write more about the transformer in detail in next following weeks.
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I like the idea of writing from Optimus Prime's point of view. I have seen the movie and quite liked it. I've got just one suggestion for now; it is that I think it will be good if you describe and explain more about the characters, even in your story, so it would be easy for those who did not watch the movie to get a clearer picture of them :)
Thanks a lot for your suggestion.Jean. Yeah. I am going to write more about this character in detail. Also, I would like to add some new stories to my assignment!
Sounds cool - I saw the movie and enjoyed it despite having no expectations. Thought the part where his car starts freaking him out was really funny.
Optimus - what kind of voice will he narrate in? He tends to talk in quite a high, almost epic register (would you guys agree)? Something about his status and origins, I guess. And I guess his thought processes would be somewhat other than human.
Which scenes might you develop?
Actually I've got two ideas at the moment. Firstly, I am thinking about if I could develop something about optimus prime and other transformers go the China,or not? The reason for me to do that is the optimus prime looks like using the Chinese Kong-Fu in the movie.I mean when he was fighting with Megatron. So I want to develop some scenes from this point of view. But I'm not quite sure if it's ok for me to do that? Because there are some significant differences between Asian culture and western culture. So I'm still thinking about. Another idea is that I want to continue writing something about the movie "transformer". For example,Megatron will reborn.More transformer will appear in the story. Could you please give me some more suggestions?
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